The Snowy Day
By Maeve
First Place
First Grade
Edmonds, WA
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The Snowy Day
When we woke up it was snowing. the flakes got bigger and bigger throughout the day.
then we got our snow stuff on and went out to play.
My little sister was so small she sunk in the snow.
I was not strong enough to get her out. So we had to call Mommy and she got her out and helped clear some snow.
After my little sister was safe, we whent sleding. We fell but we tried again and then we did it!
We had hot co-co and a cookie and warmed our toes up. then we fell asleep in front of the fireplace. It was the nicest day of my life.
Comments
Posted by Cousin Erin (not verified) on Thu, 04/23/2009 - 5:50am
That was a wonderful story! Come visit me.
love,
Erin
Posted by Aunt Susan (not verified) on Thu, 04/23/2009 - 5:42am
I am so proud of you. That was a beautiful story and I can't wait to see you on television. Remember to tell them your aunt watches Reading Rainbow all the time!
Posted by Carol Civiello (not verified) on Wed, 04/22/2009 - 6:14pm
When we spent the day with this little girl last Sept, we quickly figured out she was pretty darn smart. Great story, Maeve, and your drawings are wonderful.
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